Magic Character Sheet - Kaname Chidori Superhero

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To be perfectly honest.   I am disappointed with this.    I asked for a mid-transformation sequence that involved clearly inhuman skin color and features.....I overlooked this with the previous picture on Hinata because while he didn't go with one of the 5 races I named on my instructions, he went for one that was included in the reference I linked.   But this is getting to the point it's just ignoring my instructions.

He gave me Kaname Chidori in a swimsuit, essentially.   And it's hard to tell it's her.

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What follows are my instructions to the artist:

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Basically, whichever character finished a character and is now becoming a superhero of some sort.

One note: again, mid-transformation...so possible clothing malfunctions. I would like to clarify the following:

mid-transform, what she's becoming is obviously non-human...so parts of the girl are the human-normal tone, and parts are becoming some typical superhero strange coloration like the following characters:

Nightcrawler, She-Hulk, Red-She-Hulk, Mystique, Starfire...so on. Metal skin also good (especially if went the converted by nanites into a bio-metal being route)

Cute fangs, tails, wings, etc, are okay as well...but aim for a super-hero look rather than a fantasy look

Sexy, sexy, sexy.

Superhero clothing...

Character is reacting in surprise in somehow...angry, denial, fear, surprise, joy, aroused, whatever you think is most sexy or amusing...

Whatever character you choose, go with a power set you wouldn't expect for the character. If you go with the She-Hulk thing, minimal muscle growth please, some other way to show super strength (like accidentally breaking something...I'm not a fan of Female Muscle Growth.

for partial transformation:

part of skin, part of hair, part of face,

maybe one-eye changed, one eye human....

stuff like that

it could be coming in a wave...or it could be appearing in spots, I just like to see the process of the change